I am from a place
Where the stage is my home and spot lights hit my face
I am from a place
Where I don't feel accomplished until I hear the sound of my feet tap tapping away on the floor
I am from a place
Of five hours of brutal practices three days a week
I am from a place
Where the sound of the music can be felt from the tips of my toes to the expressions in my face
I am from a place
Where sweat dripping down my face means I've had a good day
I am from a place
Where injuries are common but won't leave me standing still in one place
I am from a place
Where my body is my instrument while I let the music play
I am from a place
Where one wrong move can leave you on your face but at doesn't stop me from being embraced by the music
I am from a place
Where my pointe shoes leave my feet blistered and sore
I am from a place
Where the music leaves me wanting more
A fouetté here a fire bird there I feel like a sparrow when I leap through the air
I am from a place
Where I won't stop dancing until my frail body gives in & I take my last breathes.

I really liked your last sentence.
ReplyDeleteI cannot dance because I'm big....
ReplyDeleteThe poem was great it really shows how much you love dancing.
I like how you said I am from a place where I won't stop dancing
ReplyDeleteBeautiful diction and I love your passion
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem and I liked the way you described dancing and how much you enjoy it.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you centered the text around one subject and really emphasized.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting poem, it's theme was quite good. Your word choice was really good.
ReplyDeleteChristina,
ReplyDeleteFantastic job! I like the line where you said "my body is like an instrument and I let the music play." Well done.
I didn't know you were a dancer. Your poem definitely shows your passion for dancing. :) Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem. I love your last line!!
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ReplyDeleteI love your last line, it shows how dedicated you are to dancing.
ReplyDeleteI can do like 8 fouttes
ReplyDeleteI like how you express your feelings through dancing.
ReplyDeleteI like how described yourself as a sparrow through the air nice overall
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem. Your raw💁
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